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Sugar content of various fruits - oldbloke's mutterings
August 27th, 2011
11:17 pm
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Sugar content of various fruits

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Date:August 28th, 2011 12:24 pm (UTC)
It's not bad, but I would try to get a little internal rhyme going, and the rhythm needs a little work.
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